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This excerpt is from Forty Years in a Day. The scene takes place in Italy, 1906. Angela must tell her husband, Alfredo, that their daughter has left for America.
This excerpt is from Forty Years in a Day. The scene takes place in Italy, 1906. Angela must tell her husband, Alfredo, that their daughter has left for America.
She held on to the back of a chair for support and looked down at the
table to avert his gaze. Her heart was pounding hard inside her chest, and she took
a few deep breaths, trying to calm down. “There’s no easy way to tell you
this,” she finally said.
“What is it, Angelina?” he said, heaving a sigh of slight impatience.
“I gave Victoria our savings so she could go to America and be with
Dominick. She’ll be safe with her brother. He’ll take care of them.” As she
spoke she saw her husband’s face twist into a knot of disbelief and rage, and
panic descended upon her like darkness on a moonless night. “She was miserable.
She was so unhappy…and the children. Believe me, Alfredo, it’s the only way
they could get away from him.”
Slamming his hand to his chest, he demanded, “Where are they?”
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Wow! This has incredible emotion it. I need to know more! :-) Good #8sunday post :-)
ReplyDeleteOh, dear. That woman has brass you know whats. Standing up to her husband in that era. God only knows what his reaction will be! My heart was racing with hers.
ReplyDeleteWhat bravery! I hope he doesn't go too far in his anger!
ReplyDeleteGreat, great post. I flinched when he slammed his hand to his chest. Not good! LOL
ReplyDeleteThe concept of "tension" in writing personified here.
ReplyDeleteKudos!
Terrific tension and emotion here. Great job showing what's at stake for her.
ReplyDeleteWow, a high stakes situation, SO much emotion. Excellent excerpt!
ReplyDeleteOh man, she's in trouble! Emotion-packed snippet. Nice!
ReplyDeleteThe emotions on both sides are so incredibly sharp. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI like how you paint the picture is such quick strokes.
ReplyDeleteOh, wow. Good for her! She's doing what's best for her daughter. There are consequences, I know, I read about the book. Sounds fascinating. Thanks for sharing this snippet.
ReplyDeleteI can only imagine the horrors her daughter and grandchildren must have been so desperate to escape that even her own father couldn't be told until after the fact.
ReplyDeleteWhat an intriguing excerpt. I'm eager to learn more.
ReplyDeleteI'm new to Weekend Writing Warriors and Snippet Sunday, and I'm very grateful for all your lovely comments!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Snippet Sunday! I'm happy you're here. :-)
ReplyDeleteWow. I can't even imagine leaving home and family in the days when that usually meant never seeing them again. This is one of my favorite times in history and I look forward to reading more!