Welcome back to Weekend
Writing Warriors and Snippet
Sunday,
where writers come together to share 8 sentences of whatever they wish. This is
Week 6 for me.
The story continues from FORTY
YEARS IN A DAY. Victoria and her four children arrived at her brother Dominick's tenement apartment: a three room railroad flat in Hell's Kitchen, New York. Victoria is completely exhausted and sleeps through the next day, obviously comforted by the fact that her sister-in-law, Genevieve, was caring for the children. She wakes to find everyone at the kitchen table.
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Vincenzo
enthusiastically greeted her, “Good morning, Mama, but it’s really night time.”
He chuckled.
“You’ve slept away the
day. We’re about to have dinner,” Dominick said.
“We went for a walk
with Aunt Genevieve. There’re so many people here…and tall buildings!” Gennaro
said.
“There’re wagons where
you can get all kinds of food for a coin,” Vincenzo added. “We even saw a train
pass over our heads. It was so loud, we covered our ears.”
Baffled by their
strange narrative, Victoria was both surprised and relieved that her children
seemed to be assimilating themselves to their new surroundings. She had prayed
they would be able to forget all the grief and horror they had witnessed, and
the process seemed to have miraculously begun. She glanced at Genevieve with
thankful eyes only another mother could understand.
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Poor Victoria - she certainly was exhausted. Hopefully, for her and for themselves, the children ARE becoming adjusted to the city. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThe conversation is very sweet
ReplyDeleteChildren are so resilient! Enjoyed this excerpt, they deserved some lightheartedness after all the trauma of the trip! Well done!
ReplyDeleteOh, they made it! Thank you! :D
ReplyDeleteI know that feeling so well . . . in fact, my husband has the kids right now, so as soon as I make my rounds, I'm going to take nice nap, too!
I can hear the sound of the city. Very nice :)
ReplyDeleteTotally intrigued by why she moved and she's running from. Good snippet, Mona. :)
ReplyDeleteWill she be settling down now? or must she continue to run?
ReplyDeleteI don't want to reveal too much right now. There's more to come. Thanks for reading, Sue.
DeleteNice picture of coming to a new land. But I doubt her kids will settle in quite as easily as she seems to think.
ReplyDeleteWhew! They made it. Hope they make it in Hells Kitchen. I'm into this story. My favorite era.
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I'm glad they finally arrived at destination!
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet - I felt the mother's exhaustion, relief to sleep a day with her children in good hands. Great job bringing the reader into the location (what a name, Hell's Kitchen!) with a sense of having escaped something horrific, it sounds like... looking forward to more!
ReplyDeleteI appreciate all your comments and reactions! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteSounds like the children had an exciting day there.
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